Time to leave fast

I was at Sweetwater Park in Tucson and found a few ducks there today, glad they are starting to come back. This American Coot came out of the water and walking around grooming himself. I sat on the ground about 30 feet away and slid closer and closer to maybe about 20 feet away, although I am not great with distances. Something in the air above spooked not only this coot but the ones in the water near the shore. He was moving fast and started the flight as I snapped the photo, but still had one foot barely on the ground. These birds are fast when they want to move.

Type of Critique Requested

  • Aesthetic: Feedback on the overall visual appeal of the image, including its color, lighting, cropping, and composition.
  • Conceptual: Feedback on the message and story conveyed by the image.
  • Technical: Feedback on the technical aspects of the image, such as exposure, color, focus and reproduction of colors and details, post-processing, and print quality.

Specific Feedback and Self-Critique

There was a lot of room on the right side which I cropped down from the upper right corner. However, it was hard keeping up with this bird, so the left edge had very little room left. I expanded the canvas and used PS content aware. That worked to a point but needed to use the healing brush to fix it a little bit. I tell you this to see if any more needs to be fixed on the left side.

Technical Details

R6m2 RF 100-500 w/1.4x Extender. 700mm f/16 1/1600 ISO 1600. I used Photo AI, darken the background, and used a curves contrast adjustment on the subject.

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Nice action image, Dean. Difficult comp with the Coot moving like that. I love their feet.

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Hello, Dean, nice and comical pose of this Coot. Ideally you would have had some more space to the left, for the bird to run into, and I wonder whether the image is level - but it may of course have been running down a slope or something. Nice catch in any case ! Best, Hans