Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
I’m doing a lot of walking around and try to capture everyday things we see. I just look at them different, as any one who uses a camera knows exactly what i am saying. So I took this image but framed it different so it will bring question. As always For Fun !!!
Specific Feedback
My framing and editing ideas. I have cropped it tighter but i didn’t get the contrast i was looking for. The softness is a part of the effect i was going for. hand held slow shutter speed
Technical Details
Hand held ISO 500 Shutter 1 second f9 edit in Photoshop.
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Very cool image, Gill. Looks like a fan, but I’ve never seen one quite like this and I love the way the light shows up on the surface behind it. Excellent work.
Thanks … its a spinning flower you put in the garden…
Interesting. I guess I’ve never looked closely at them. Great eye.
Very cool!! I love the framing and the three layers. Lovely tonalities! And congratulations on the EP!!
Thanks. … Just an everyday item that i tried to make an interesting image from…
To get the EP made me feel really good. Its like my music, when you get a compliment , you feel like you connected something positive. Peace to our Planet.
I really like this picture. I think it’s fun to take ordinary items, find a new point of view and turn into black and whites. You did a great job. Thanks for sharing
Thanks. Everyday items has been a project I’m working on for my next Photography/Jounal book. I do a book every year. This will a chapter and I’ll include other chapters and some music on a CD in the back. I think there are interesting items all around us. Just shoot them with no rules. Make it play time. Peace to our Planet.