The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Another image I decided to post keeping the vibe of simplicity. To walk around and see something we see everyday and I thought I would make an image… As I age I’m looking around and seeing things even more simpler. It’s like playing that one perfect note on the guitar. I guess it is all the same to me.
Specific Feedback
Subjective Photography.
Technical Details
ISO 400 Shutter 400 f 18 edit in photoshop. very little editing.
Critique Template
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I had some ideas shown below, which include a high-contrast B&W conversion and some cropping to better focus the eye on the graphic qualities of this image. I hope you don’t mind and find this useful;
Don’t mind at all. Your cropping idea was something I toyed with. A lot of my images bleed off the edges so this image was kept with no cropping. I like the cropping and more contrast look.
Thanks for showing interest.
Gill, the stark simplicity and very interesting shape work well here. I do like how Jim’s crop makes the view even more about the shape. The two bits of leaf are a good change of pace.
Thanks for the feedback Jim’s edit works great. I like both versions. The NPN is a great place to share our image ideas and offer different variations of an image. Always learning.
Gill: I’m going to be a bit of a contrarian and go on the crop. My only nit with your original post was the one branch exiting the frame when all the others are contained. Here’s my quick and dirty remedy.
On a completely separate note, I noticed that you uploaded a full size image (3481x5063). Site recommendations are for posts 2000 pixels on the long side. Not a requirement but posting larger images often leaves you to the mercy of site downsizing changes. >=))>
on the crop. My only nit with your original post was the one branch exiting the frame when all the others are contained. Here’s my quick and dirty remedy.