Toddling Along with Mama

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SRB01334 copy 3XNB
SRB01334 copy 3XNB2222Ɨ1369 1.05 MB

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Etosha Park, Namibia
We were able to follow this sweet baby for awhile,
after he and mom left a morning waterhole

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all comments and suggestions welcome, as always

Technical Details

Sony A1
200-600 @ 600mm
Software: Adobe Photoshop 25.12 (Windows)
Date Taken: 2022-05-09 09:23:33
Exposure Time: 1/1600 sec
F Number: f/8
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 2500
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0 EV (Zebras)

Processed with DxO Pure Raw + PS 2025

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An interesting composition, Iā€™m not sure if you shot like this or later composed like this ?
You may crop out the ear of bigger elephant for better composition.

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Hi Jagdeep, this is right out of the camera, almost full frame. cropped so the leg of the following elephant not visible. Thanks for the suggestion - will implement.

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Hi Sandy. Love the placement of the legs and the remarkable toe nails on the calf. Can feel the energy as it strives to keep up to mom