Watching the kids play

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Description

The calves of same age (from different mothers) were playing together, under the careful eyes of a mother.

This is the kind of image, I love to shoot with a big smile behind the camera.

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Technical Details

Canon R 5; 500 mm; ISO 1000; 1/800 sec. at f 5

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This makes me smile too so you have captured the moment very well. The light shows the texture of their hide which always amazes me.

To be picky, the very top of the frame distracts me as I wonder what is in the darkness. I might try a square crop.

Well done!

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Baby elephants are cute and you captured maximum cuteness, I like how mom is staying pretty close to keep them out of trouble. I have no nits for you and like the image as presented…Jim

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Perhaps crop the top, just below the left-most gray boulder (?). I find that the top edge draws my eye up from the ellies. Alternatively, perhaps removing some contrast from that top edge? Or maybe just burning the gray boulders a bit?

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