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Description
I have been sitting on these photographs from RI, because of the white sky and very little detail in that sky. The last shot was the starting point. The new DXO PhotoLab 8 & Nik Collection 7, has a film pack profile and I use Kodak Elgar 100, to get the best sky detail. So there they are.
Thank you for stopping by.
Peter
Specific Feedback
any
Technical Details
Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm & 1.4ext, f10, +2EV 1/2000, ISO 3200, The shots are cropped by 50% and I used Kodak Ektar 100 Nik film pack.
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The first one is my favorite. There’s something rather majestic about the pair. I could see a tight crop to emphasize the pair even more. Your work on the sky is an improvement. Great capture.
I agree with @Allen_Brooks - the wing position is excellent in the first; and cropping from the right would keep the interesting clouds in the shot. A fine series, Peter.
Yes, go with the first and sky looks perfect. I think that you found a way to recover the surrounding sky which provides mood to the image. I like the end result. …Jim
Excellent work, Peter. I’ll have to look at that when I have a dull sky to see if it works for me. Your images are a huge improvement on the out of camera version.
Hi Allen, Mike, Sandy, Jim & Dennis
Thank you for the comments. The Nik Collection can be used as stand-alone software or part of the Presets in DXO PhotoLab 8.
There are a repost, with a closed crop.
Peter
