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Description
Another one from the wildlife refuge last Wednesday. Water levels were high and there was a nice vantage point at the corner of one of the ponds where the ducks were reasonably cooperative. This is still a very substantial crop, but I think it held up well enough for web viewing.
Specific Feedback
Does the head-on presentation work in this case?
Technical Details
Sony A1, FE 200-600 + 1.3 TC @ 840 mm, beanbag on car window, f/9, 1/2000, iso 6400. NR using DxO, processing in LR & PS CC. Cropped to 1894x2606. Microcontrast boost on the Pintail, some texture reduction on the water where I still had a bit of noise.
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Dennis, a really nice look at this ducky. The head-on view works fine, IMO, and I like your title.
The water ripples are great and add another dimension.
Well done!
Thanks you, @SandyR-B and @Peter_Morrissey Peter: I rather liked putting it in the top of a vertical frame myself. I can think of some old shots where that probably would have been more effective than the way I framed them originally.
Your composition (bird at top) does give the feel the duck is swimming towards the viewer. Never really thought of this before. And the water motion adds to this feeling.
Nice idea on the comp – not sure I would have thought of it either. I love how the duck’s color matches the water! The head-on look works especially well here as the two white areas on the sides of the bill fit so nicely against the centered white on the breast. (Cool title!) The reflection is very nice.
One extremely pixel-peeping note – there is a trace of blue CA on the right side of the head. Desaturating blue might fix it nicely. Since there is not much blue in the frame you might not even need to mask, but if you did need to, it likely wouldn’t require microsurgery.
