"You Looking At Me"

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Description

Hot Spring Day This guy would not quit looking at me. So for Fun i did a few shots and there you go…I edited the best I could and keep it kinda natural …

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Bright sun and dirty water and he just kept looking at Me !!! Could be edited different ways… Not sure I did the best on this but I’m out of my comfort zone in this style of photography !!!

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ISO 400 f14 shutter 250 Edit in B&W … in Photoshop

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Gill, a fun looking scene here. Nature can provide some really neat encounters like this one here… :+1:
Only thought for change is a bit more D&B on highlights and shadows. No nits at all just some visual tweaking for better viewing in the end… :smiling_face_with_sunglasses:

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I dodged his face best I could. Burn the shell down. Impossible light to work with I did the best I could. Thanks for showing interest.

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New Edit. I think Paul was right and so I tried to edit again.. Hard Sun to work with !!!

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I did a new edit and maybe someone can move it to the right place. Thanks

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Thanks to Diane Miller for giving me the tools to help with my photography and vision.