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Description
I’ve seen more Robins this year than in any recent year. The first is my favorite for the perch and background. In the second I like how the Robin blends in with the leaves and contrasts with the grass. In the third, the Robin is centered, but I felt the rocks were an integral part of the image.
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Canon R5: 100-500 at 500 mm
1/1000 f10 ISO 1600
1/1000 f7.1 ISO 500
1/1000 f7.1 ISO 320
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I like the first one the most as well, Allen. The second feels a little too tight for my taste, though I agree with the way it works with the background I like the rocks in the third as well, but wish the bird were facing you or maybe the other way to make the composition work a little better.
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Very nice! I also prefer the first for the clean BG and lovely perch. I could go for a touch more room on the left – just a touch. The other two are nice environmental shots, but both feel like there is too much of a warm cast, and possibly just a bit too much on the first. A slight crop from the right could work for the last one but the rock on the right is attractive and I don’t mind the bird looking out of the frame.
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Nice series Allen. I like the first and third image best. Interesting how the dark areas in the background of the first image kind of mimic the bird. Nice details and a lovely perch.
I like the rock in the third image too though I could see a crop from the right as an alternative.
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