Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
I saw these bugs on a honeysuckle leaf in my garden yesterday. I’m not sure but I think they may be assassin bug nymphs - fairly newly hatched. I think the gray shells in the image are their old exoskeletons newly shed. There were a whole bunch more on the underside of the leaf.
Specific Feedback
I wish I could have done focus stacking but I thought these guys were just moving around too much so this is a single shot with focus mainly on the lower red nymph.
I took out several flash highlights on the bodies. I think given these guys are new and shiny contributed to the highlights but I’m still working on my diffuser set up. Think I might try pulling down the built-in panel on the flash to go along with my Angler diffuser to see if that helps.
I see this as more of a natural history shot than any kind of work of art. It was really interesting to witness.
Technical Details
Canon 7D mark II, Sigma 150 f2.8 macro lens, 1.4x teleconverter, 580 EX II Speedlite, Angler diffuser
ISO 400, f32, 1/250s hand held