Baby Red-bellied Woodpecker (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 1 (latest)

What changed: I re-cropped his one to vertical and added more space to the bottom of the frame.

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

It has been a busy Summer for all the animal parents that live on or around our property. The first time that I saw this recently fledged woodpecker, it was following the male parent around begging for food. Tough love and a few pecks from dad motivated the kid to independence. I liked the BW pattern on the back which compelled me to choose this one over the others.

Feedback Requested

This bird typically shows up in the evening, and the shaded, bright light was ideal for this shot. How do you like the overall lighting scheme and comp?

Technical Details

Camera: Z9
Lens: 600mm f4
Focal length: 600mm
Shutter speed: 1/1000
Aperture: f10
ISO: 2500
Flash: -1.3ev

A fine image, Jim. The composition, perch and pose all work well together and I like the soft lighting. I could see bringing up the bottom enough to keep the perch from exiting in the corner which would also decenter the bird a bit in the vertical direction.

The original poster added a revised version of their image.

The second crop is much better as your composition is now symmetrical as far as the exciting of the branch is concerned.

Hi Jim

The Red-bellied Woodpecker looks great. I like the original posting because of the air it gives the woodpecker.

Peter

Wonderful capture – great detail and lighting and the perfect perch. I love the soft detail in the BG, quietly hinting at the environment.

Thank you @Dennis_Plank , @huw1 , @Peter_Morrissey , and @Diane_Miller for your comments and critiques. I find that either of the comps works with this subject…Jim

yep you are probably right - both work!