The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
One of our neighbors has this banana tree that has bloomed and fruited the past couple of years. Our recent harsh (for us) winters have damaged the tree but it has bounced back.>=))>
Specific Feedback
There was a little bit of roof showing through in the BG and I tried to darken it to make it a bit less obvious. Any other suggestions for taming it?
Technical Details
Sony A7rIII
Sony FE 70-200 f2.8 GM-II, 2xTC @ 238mm
ISO 400, 1/100 @ f11
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I really like the depth of field you used on this one, Bill. Everything that should be sharp is and nothing else is. I see where you played with the roof, and it looks a bit odd to me. I think the edges of your selection could use some refining. I’d probably pick a few of the different shades of green with the color picker, select that area, making sure I had the edges into the foreground by a pixel or two, and splash some blotches of paint in there to give it a textureless but mottled appearance.
