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This is a revision of a photo I posted in abstract nature, also. I noticed the infinity symbol and moved and removed a few birds.
Any comments.
Info posted with other photo.
This is a clever image Jim. I like the general arrangement of the birds and the infinity symbol. I’d recommend adding a bit space to the left of the frame to help balance the composition. Nice creative work!
Very clever, Jim. I really like the title and you managed to move the birds around to make it work perfectly.
@Alfredo_Mora Thanks. @Dennis_Plank Thanks.
I’m not into bird photographs as a rule, but this really grabbed my attention. Just incredible. The white on black is very graphic, but it’s the blur of the birds that I find stunning.
@Chris_Baird Thank you for the kind words.
Well, this is fun. I did like your very original image as well. Nice noticing of the pattern. I looked back at your earlier post, and then I saw it. I think you did a nice job finding a unique design, not your typical V-formation. And agree that a little more space to the right would help. Nice work from something you didn’t seem too pleased with originally.
@patrick6 and @Alfredo_Mora: I posted one with some added to left and right.
