Christmas Eve Gifts

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Description

Kids go wild opening presents. And adults get swept up in the excitement. We, too, want to feel their energy. The whole scene was lights, colors, and energy. I tried to capture that mood and this seemed to come closest to it.

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The composition is purposely unstructured in order to show how the event was. That was my thinking. What do you think?

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iPhone 13


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Igor, it looks like you all had a fun time. Thanks for sharing the scene here. Happy New Year too… :star_struck:

Interesting composition, Igor. The effect of the lights streaking at a slant helps add energy to the image. I also like what appears to be a bit of motion blur. I do wish the young lady in from was evincing a bit more excitement, but it’s a candid shot so you get what you get.

Great capture of fun and excitement!! The gifts look airborne!

Why didn’t I think to capture our 9-year-old granddaughter at work? She has excellent form ripping off the wrapping and throwing it behind her head in one great sweep.

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