Clam Beach Sand

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Alien new-borne?

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Image Description

Patterns in the sand created by the ebbing tide at Clam Beach, AK.

Technical Details

Canon EOS 5D II; Canon EF 28-70mm @ 57mm; f/11 @ 1/125 sec, ISO 800; Gitzo tripod, RRS BH 55; remote trigger

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The relationship of light and shadow works so well Bob! You did a great job with the overall framing. My imagination sees tortured faces in the image for some reason. Only minor area to correct is that darker triangle on the bottom left corner.

Thank you @Alfredo_Mora for your comments and criticism. I will see what I can do with that LL corner.