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Tillamook Rock is the home of the aptly named “Terrible Tilly” lighthouse. The light is no longer active but the rock remains a haven for seals and birds. (More images to come) I took this from my drone on its flight to the rock but liked the sense of isolation against sea and sky. All comments welcome. >=))>
I intentionally centered the horizon line and the lighthouse. Does that work for you?
DJI Mini 3 Pro
ISO 100, 1/40 @ f1.7, 1/64 CPL
Amazing to see the lighthouse so remote from any actual landmass, or at least any visible land from this POV. Bill, I think the centering overall works just fine here. I feel the scene being entirely blue would make little difference of any rearranging of the water to sky ratio.
A fine look at a point for a water vessel obscure bollard…
Beautiful work. This reminds me of a Rothko. I would process this to make it an abstract of tonalities and see what happens.
I really like your use of space on this, the relative position of the horizon gives a real sense of distance, and I think it makes this image. I like the colour scale as well.
Bill, the reflection of the clouds in the middle of the sea make me think about a sand split where the lighthous stand. Original composition.
I think I would turn this into a black and white. It is very minimalist and the colors don’t do much for me and I think the tones could be punchier with a B&W version. Did you use a polarizer? There is a large portion of the sky that appears to be so much darker than the rest of the sky which usually happens when shooting with a wide angle lens and a polarizer. I love the fact that you centered the lighthouse. That works perfectly for this type of image and brings a sense of balance that you wouldn’t be able to attain if it where off center. I really like this image, Bill.