Critique Style Requested: Standard
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Description
Looking down into a ravine in Acadia National Forest, I imagined seeing this flame erupting from a frame of cool green foilage.
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Sony DSC-HX80
1/100 at f/3.5, ISO 80
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SandyR-B
(Sandy Richards-Brown)
November 19, 2024, 5:12pm
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A lovely fall image! Great colours , fine detail, and a nice comp.
That little gray blob (rock?) on the lower edge draws my eye a bit.
Thank you Sandy! Yes, I did debate that rock with myself a bit. But when I tried to remove it, I found that it was much too heavy!
Pieter, the framing of the colorful tree looks good and sets it off well. In the large view, the upper portions look a bit soft. The bright bit of stone in the lower left corner needs to go away and the bluish does get significant attention. That can be toned down with some local desaturation.
Thank you Mark! Your input is always appreciated!