Lovely high key image Nichole with some wonderful structure especially the vertical lines by the trees. One thing you may want to consider is cropping off the top of the frame. My eye was drawn to the white space up there. I enjoyed the darker parts of the trunk bark against the white.
This is a lovely study in texture. With that in mind, I agree with Alfred about the sky at the top. It catches my eye and draws me out of the frame at the top, especially because the beautiful wispy branches point upward. There’s also a faint trunk very close to the edge of the lower left side of the frame that catches my eye (this is really a small nit). I’m thinking something like this (I also increased the contrast a bit using a curve, to bring out more of the cool texture). Anyway, this really is lovely.
Hi Nichole, this is wonderfully high-key black and white image. Well seen and nice processing too. I think the suggested changes by @Alfredo_Mora and @Bonnie_Lampley help to simplify and strengthen the graphic nature of the image. I have one other recommendation: When I look at the image, my eye automatically goes to the two main trees at the center of the image. They look to me like they’re leaning to the left. Trees always go their own way and it’s sometimes hard to determine if the camera was straight or not. I would recommend a rotate to the right so that those trees look straight. Again, something that adds to the strength of the image.
Finally, I am not sure what color profile you chose when you exported the JPG, but Photoshop and Affinity Photo both complained and assigned their own grey scale profile.
Even with black and white images, I would recommend staying with the sRGB profile when you export. Most browsers and photo apps can handle the sRGB regardless if the image is in color or black and white.
Hope that helps, you have a fantastic image here and with just a few tweaks, it’s a perfect candidate for a fine art print.
I can go either way about the crop of the sky. In some ways, it adds quite a bit of mystery, and since it’s no brighter than the rest of the image, it does not draw my eye off of the frame.
Lots to like about this one. Well seen.
My PS also complained about the file profile. When I opened the file I expected I was going to move the dark point of the curve to the right to increase the contrast, leaving the whites alone.
Below is a snip of the image as imported with the curves open.
I pulled the curve down which should have increased the darks with only minimal affect on the lights. But that is not what happened - just the opposite.
I’m sure you will agree this is not as it should be.
Check out other images shot about the same time as this. Post one here for us to try out (it doesn’t have to be pretty). This will help us see if it is just that image or if it is others.
You may need to go back, laboriously, through ALL your settings, starting at the camera. If you are not sure about one of your settings, ask here.
@nichole This is a beautiful photo and would be gorgeous on a large canvas.
I like the light bleed from the top. I would consider rotating the vertical lines to be vertical. Also, I think that if you would have stopped down away from wide open there would be more definition in the textures in the photo. Not more contrast, but more definition.
Nicely done Nichole, with very little to critique.
I don’t think so. I use it on many of my B&W shots. What really puzzles me is why the curve is weighted to the left and not the right. It is a very high key image and would make more sense if the curve were flipped left to right with the tonalities on the right and little on the left - all the blacks are light greys in the original. In LR History tab, click on the first setting at the bottom of the stack then make a virtual copy and try it over again to see what happens.
Though I don’t see why it would happen that way, is it possible the camera mode was set to monochrome?
I like the image as is, and it becomes more and more amazing the larger you make the image when you look at it. The only minor comment I have is that you maybe could rotate the image slightly to make the tree trunks vertical.
One of the choices in the curves tool is to “Show the amount of:”
The choices are:
Light (0-255)
or
Pigment/ink %
The default is Light, but if Pigment is selected, curves will work the opposite of what normally happens.
@nichole, your image is set to Pigment…if you change that to Light Curves will work normally.