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Pertinent technical details or techniques: Canon 5ds-r, 1/640, 560mm, using 100x400x1.4 extension lens. Removed out of focus bird on right.
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A nice array of Goldfinches, Wayne. Good job getting three in focus at once. For my taste, the holly leaves in the bottom don’t add to the image. I think you could crop from the bottom to just above the leftmost berry and clone over its stem and anything left of the greenery to get a tighter composition.
Nice to get these goldfinches in different poses. Good detail. I could see cloning out the two berries on the left and the bit of green sticking up in the middle, but I like the rest-has a seasonal feel to it.
I agree that it is a good job getting three birds in focus and different poses. I don’t mind the red berries but would remove the two little leaves pocking up in the middle. The holly leaves and berries do seem in season. I also like the very complimentary bg.