The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Lake Clark, AK
At dawn, a grizzly patrols the beach looking for clams.
Specific Feedback
thoughts and suggestions welcomed
Technical Details
very old image:
NIKON D300S
500 mm
Date Taken: 2010-08-18 08:00:49
Exposure Time: 1/500 sec
F Number: f/8
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 800
Exposure Program: Aperture priority
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0.33 EV
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Great silhouette Sandy. It looks like a National Park Post Card. I really like the size of the bear and the layers of colors are great. Good pick for this week’s challenge.
Nice catch! I think I’d move the bear a little more out of center, but that’s an artist’s choice thing. Looking at the thumbnail, I thought the horizon needs a small CCW move. Downloaded and confirmed – both the distant water horizon, and thankfully the dark spit the bear is walking on is parallel to the distant water’s edge.
Really nice shot Sandy. I love the layers and the details on the bear in silhouette. I might make it a touch more prominent by cropping a bit of foreground and sides, but that’s nitpicking.
Hi Sandy, Great capture. This image made me smile. A good caption might be ‘Griz on a mission’ as the image conveys direction and determination. Well done.