I want all of you to start flying today.

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This series was photographed in the back of the Conn. River, on July 16, at 7 AM, in a heave hazes.
The two juveniles to the left had started to fly, but the one on the right stayed in the nest. Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm & 1.4ext, f10, 700mm, -1EV, ISO 800, cropped by 60%. In DXO PhotoLab 7, I use some control points to help with the haze.

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Awesome series Peter. I love the head down look on the juvenile on the right in some of these, and indeed it looks like it is time for them to start flying on their own. What a nice nest full of kids. Good to see the ecosystem there will support them all.

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Nice job on this one, Peter. Good to see that they managed to bring off three chicks, that’s more than I’ve seen our local osprey do. Nice composition in all of these images.

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Excellent series, Peter. I especially like the third one. Despite the haze, it looks as if you had some nice light.

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Hi Ed, Dennis & Allen
DXO PhotoLab did a good job with the haze. Thank you for the comments. This year, there were at lest 4 nest with 3 juveniles, the rest had 2.
This ws a good year for Ospreys.
Peter

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