Juvenile Acorn Woodpecker + RP

It was feeling tonally flat so I did a slight punch.

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I was surprised this morning to see a juvenile this late. I don’t know how long they keep the deep eye color – its been very dark bluish gray in ones I’ve shot in past years just out of the nest. I think this is a female just starting to grow the black feathers between the white ones and red cap.

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Screenshot 2024-09-02 at 2.06.20 PM

Minimal global tonal adjustments in LR. Into PS for denoise and cloning out part of the perch support. Shot in horizontal format and cropped to 50% of original pixels. I was afraid to move my hands enough to zoom or rotate the camera.


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How nice is that. She looks all fluffed up and ready to go. I like where you caught her on the limb and nothing else around, no distractions. The BG complements the branch, so the Woodpecker stands out. First thing I see is her red head.
I was reading how they drill individual holes in trees by the thousands to store acorns. Amazing bird. Thanks

Nice little head turn. I’m impressed at how good your detail is using a slow shutter speed. As usual, a pleasing background and perch.

Great look at this little juvie. Interesting curved branch, sharp detail (as always) and nice pose.
Well-done!

That perch is so perfect for this bird, Diane, and the bird gave you such a nice pose. A beautiful image.

Thanks, @SkipsPics, @Allen_Brooks, @SandyR-B and @Dennis_Plank. The light was really flat – I’m wondering if I should/could try for an improvement. They store acorns everywhere. I took down an unused bird house last summer and found it full of acorns. Allen, the sharpness is helped by being on a very sturdy (i.e. heavy) tripod + head. That in turn helps AF. Then I shoot a short burst and hope I catch an instant when the bird is still.

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Diane: you’ve captured sharp detail in the bird and her dark coloration contrasts very nicely with the pale background. Additionally, her pose with the slight head turn makes for a pleasing composition.

Thanks, @Richard_Sandor – these guys are an entertaining nuisance. They drill holes in houses and literally hollow out power poles.

Diane: we have Northern Flicklers which fortunately are not nearly as aggressive as your bird. Our telephone poles are safe. :slight_smile: