Keeping an eye out

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

We were up in Margot Creek in Katmai about 10 miles south of Brooks Falls (as the bear walks) when we came upon this mom and her four cubs. They were frolicking about together when they looked across the creek. They were taking it all in when mom peered around the bush to make sure everything was okay. She was very relaxed and went back to fishing for salmon. Very fun to see these four after mom moved to this area to keep her cubs away from the other bears at Brooks Falls.

Specific Feedback

Looking for thoughts on composition and framing. Appreciate any and all comments that you all have to improve the photo. Thanks.

Technical Details

Canon 7D m2
EF 100-400 f4.5-5.6
ISO 3200
176mm
F5 1/2000

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Great shot! I like the centering of the cubs. They definitely take the focus and have plenty of room to breathe. Maybe just a little more off the right to the black curl right on the edge of the frame. I think you could also bring it in to the darker grass on the right and a little more off the left to really bring some more attention to the bears. Then it is like mommy is peeking in on the cubs. Nice work!

JT, thank you for your thoughts. I’ll definitely play around with the cropping.

Single moms face challenges. Bears know everything about that. But raising 4 (FOUR!) cubs! But this is much more than a lucky shot. Although you could play around with the cropping, I would leave the picture as is. The focus lies neatly on the cubs and the peeking mom completes the story very nicely. I wish her good luck. (And you too for your next encounter).

Xavier. Thanks for your thoughts. It was quite exciting to see all four cubs!

So very beautiful and cubs bring so much charm to the image !
You may add some more canvas on the RHS.

Jagdeep, thanks I’ll definitely try adding a little to the RHS. Thank you for your thoughts.

Timothy: I don’t get over here very much but this is an attention grabber. I don’t think I’ve ever seen bear quadruplets and to catch them all looking in the right direction with mom hovering nearby is just magical. Great capture of a unique and special family and moment. >=))>

Thanks Bill. It was a very cool moment when they all seemed to line up for their photo​:grinning_face:

Four cubs are exceedingly rare. A special moment. It must have been dark to need ISO 3200. Based on the relatively high shutter speed, you probably could have traded off shutter speed for a lower ISO. I shot the 7D and 7D, Mk II for many years. Great cameras, but not great high ISO performers. The image looks a bit soft, probably due to the high ISO. Regardless, a once in a lifetime capture to be proud of.

Jerry, great suggestion. I was shooting fast as mom was splashing up and down the creek fishing but it definitely would have been helpful to trade off shutter speed for ISO for this shot. Thanks​:grinning_face:

Great shot Timothy. It’s moments like this that make wildlife photography so rewarding. The mama bear’s face being half hidden by the grass makes this image special.

Ted, thanks it was being in the right place at the right time. No matter how much planning good luck is always helpful.