Lawnboy 2

Critique Style Requested: Standard

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Description

This is the same Halloween Pennant from a couple days ago.

Specific Feedback

Had better luck with the AI Denoise on this one and liked the spread wing pose.

Technical Details

Sony A7RIII
Sony FE 70-200 f2.8 GM-II, 2xTC @ 400mm
ISO 1600
1/800 @ f8


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Looks really good to me, Bill. The color and detail is wonderful… :sunglasses::+1:
I have to admit, when I first saw this my immediate reaction was a bi-plane. I had lunch with a coworker last weekend that use to have a Stearman Bi-Plane. Although he sold the unit awhile back he still has his pilots license covering up to and including multi-engine stuff.
As a side note: He was on Singapore Airline 006 that crashed on the runway back in 2000. The story he told from his perspective having a broken back, broken nose, and broken hip from the incident was truly freighting.

Love seeing these wings shown so brilliantly Bill. Really shows off this species quite well. Glad to see the noise problem solved too. We even get to see the patterns on the abdomen. Well done.