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Description
My wife and I just got back from a week long trip to Navarre Beach, Florida. I visited the marine reserve area on a few mornings. On our last morning there, this least bittern flew and perched among the reeds as I watched from the opposite shore of the pond. A lifer bird for me.
Specific Feedback
I included two versions above. I did a rather quick removal of the reeds in front of the bird in the second image.
Any thoughts or preference between the two? Thinking I might prefer the first image as being more true to the nature of the bird and the reeds aren’t that obstructive.
Technical Details
Canon R7, 200-800mm @800mm, handheld
ISO 1600, f9, 1/3200s
Processed in DXO PureRaw 4 and Photoshop.
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Ooh what a beauty! Nice light, too. The plants could easily be overwhelming, but they have a particular order and regularity that frames the bird as well as giving information about where it lives. I particularly like the angle of the few its clinging to - the repetition of the angle of the bird itself is pleasing. Even the colors are harmonious! In terms of the cloning…maybe a compromise between the complete excision and the full complement. What a terrific opportunity well exploited!
I like both versions, but the selected reed removal does provide a slightly stronger comp over the original. You did well considering this is one of the most difficult birds to observe due to their secretive habits. Very nice capture…Jim
What a great look at the Bittern, Allen. The detail and color are excellent-looks as if you had some nice warm light. I definitely like the first one the best. It has more of an environmental feel and the second one gives me a sense that the bird was pasted on the scene.
I have a liking for partially obscured birds, Allen, and this is no exception. In this case, I think a compromise might give you the best result. The relatively heavy reed in front of the eye seems to be a nuisance, but I think the rest could stay and still provide the feel of the original without the extra distraction.
Hi Allen
The Bittern always poses photograph changes, the first being they are seldom out in the open. For that reason I also like the first post with the reeds in the frame. The framing and coloring of the Bittern are spot on.
Peter
