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Description
We got a really nice sunset at Makaha Beach on Oahu last week.
Specific Feedback
I probably should have cropped off the lighter areas on the right in this image, but I wanted to keep the little point with the palm tree silhouettes. I left the few people on the beach enjoying the sunset, which could probably be removed. I cloned out a small bush that was intruding on the bottom right. Thanks for any comments or suggestions. They are appreciated.
Technical Details
Canon R5, f4.4, 1/80s, iso 100, 24-105 lens at 35mm. Cropped to remove dark areas above and below without much added interest.
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I agree you could disappear some but not all of the people on the beach and maybe try a tighter panoramic crop. Otherwise a very nice shot. Colour is wonderful, especially in the cloud.
Very beautiful sunset. Skyies like this are part of the wonder of Hawaii.
Vibrant colours and cloud swirls. I agree a BIT of the right would be good, and more of a pano crop would emphaisize the best parts of the clouds.
Very cool!
Fantastic colors in the clouds, especially the subtle red tones in the darker part of the cloud. The right side however is not working for me, I would crop it out and I think I would try to clone out most of the people, except for the couple in the right. I know it will place them near the photo’s edge after cropping but with everything else clones out it would give a sense of great solitude under a stunning sunset.
Thank you @SandyR-B and @Youssef_Ismail. I went a head and re-cropped and cleaned up some of the watchers on the beach. I love this version. It is interesting that the couple on the right is actually watching some surfers that are pretty hard to see just behind them. What an evening to surf, hunh? I also posted a version with no watchers and flipped horizontally.
