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These Cattle Egrets were in the first tree as I enter the Wetlands on Oct 20 at 7:50 AM
Thank you for coming by.
Peter

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Technical Details

Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm, 500mm, f7.1, -1.7EV, ISO 1000 cooped by 10% in DXO PhotoLab 8.

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Peter - Excellent shots, with fine detail, great whites, and environment.
The first image is especially good, with the egrets close together and in great poses.
Well-done!

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Hi Peter, nice contrast in the image with the birds versus surroundings. Great to see the eye of all the birds in both images. While there is a critical focus on the distant bird in both shots, I think all the birds are reasonably sharp especially when considering the varying focal planes. Nice captures.

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Nice look at the egrets in their environment. I particularly like the first one for the similar poses.

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Hi Peter: Very nice images of the cattle Egrets. Looks like they’re just coming into breeding plumage. I do like the first one a bit better as it shows the birds off more, but both are fine images.

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Hi Sandy, Allen Sparks, Allen Brooks & Dennis.
Thank you for your comments. FL opened up new world of photography.
Peter