Just another evening stroll.

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Description

The Egret was photographed in RockyNeck State Park, on May 21, at 6:10 PM.
Then you for stopping by.
Peter

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Technical Details

Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm & 1.4ext, f9, 631mm, 1/1600, -1EV, ISO 500 and cropped by45% in DXO Photo Lab7.

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Nice work on the egret plumage, Peter. It looks very white while retaining good detail. I could see more room for the virtual legs if you have it in the original. There’s a light colored spot in the upper left zone that you might want to remove as it tends to catch my eye.

I like the pose here. It looks like this bird is intent on business and has somewhere to go.

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Hi Dennis
I just opened it up some and remove the spot I think you were talking about.
Peter

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You found the spot, Peter. Excellent job on the repost.

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Hi Peter, nice details and a fine pose with the head turn towards us. Exposure looks really good - nice job against that dark BG. Good subject placement - well done.