The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Heading up the hill in Bouddi, there’s a simple curiosity about what I’ll see from the top. In my mind, I’m already framing the shots, looking forward to the new sights and the quiet surprises that nature might have in store. It’s just the thought of a different view, something new to capture and remember, that keeps my feet moving one step after another.
Hey @Saundie, I can see what you were after here. Nice composition and use of B/W. Though, it seems as though there are a few different scenes going on in here at once. First I see the trees and the clouds. Really like the sweep of the one on the right. Then I see the lines of the grasses with the line of the walkway. Nice little scene there, maybe even an abstract waiting to happen. So, my eye goes back and forth, not sure where to land. Looks like a great place for you to explore more, or look at more images from what you got.
@patrick6
Thanks Patrick, yes I see what you are saying. Not an easy place to revisit, so had a play with what I have … took some of the light and clarity out of the grass and intersected with a linear graduation, pushing the light up the hill. Took a lot of the texture out of the sky and dropped the the exposure a bit. Thanks for the valuable input, let me know what you think.
Really nice Don !!! I like all the different edits. Great perspective on this shot. Kept it simple and yet some of it could be complex. Maybe a slight vignette … maybe not … as always great black and white photography !!!
