Critique Style Requested: In-depth
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Self Critique
The pilons ( ? correct spelling ) with their reflections against a long exposed sky and water
Creative direction
There is a lot on black and white interplay - the sky, especially the central clouds, pilons. I tried too simplify the image by taking multiple long expoures
Specific Feedback
Thoughts on simplifying this further - eg by separating the 2 sets of pilons
Of course, any other direction to explore
Technical Details
150 secs - rest standard
Description
Walking on the Palm coast on an early morning - relatively calm, when I saw these pilons standing out . Personally I love long exposures of water and sky and saw this as an opportunity to make a meaningful black and white image