Pinpoint Landing

Update with @Dennis_Plank’s suggestion:

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I tracked this fellow from a post across the pond/marsh hoping he’d land on this one near me. Lucky me.

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How does the B&W work? I like the bottom trees in the distance, but wonder if I should crop/clone them out?

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Nikon Z 8, Nikkor 800m PF, 1/2500 Sec @ f/6.3, ISO 900, very cool Monopod.


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Hi David - Sweet! The B&W works perfectly here, and the lower trees add a lot of interest. Excellent pose from the egret, fine handling of the whites and shadows - not the tiniest nit from me!

This is lovely, David. The only thing I might change is to do a curves adjustment or something similar to bring the more subdued tones on the egret up a bit and give it a tad more pop from the background.

@SandyR-B Thanks for the kind comments. I really appreciate them.

@Dennis_Plank, thanks for the suggestion. I struggled with how to separate the sky and the bird in B&W. I posted a revision above. Let me know if it’s in the right direction.

I think it is - the bird seems to have a bit more life and zip which the pose demands - so much life and energy. The square crop works excellently since there isn’t any framing or other device to give context. The post though does some of that. I can imagine a marina or some similar place where this bird tolerates us in its life. Black and white helps us concentrate on these elements of your photo. Bravo.

I do like the change, David. Nice work.

Nice catch David - l like the landing pose here and the B&W treatment works well. I’d keep the trees in the lower BG - they give a nice sense of context.

@Kris_Smith, @Dennis_Plank, and @Allen_Sparks, thank you for the kind comments. Very much appreciated.

Wonderful!! I love the pose, the post and the trees! The quality of soft focus on the trees is just right, for my taste. I’m inclined toward the OP – the bird has such a nice luminosity – but both are gorgeous! I wonder about bringing out a bit more detail in the post – especially the top half. (I’d leave the bottom half as it is to act as a vignette to keep the eye from running down it and off the bottom, as there is so much interesting detail toward the bottom.

I got way behind here the last week or more, so just now trying to catch up a bit.

Hi David, I like the increased brightness in the wings on the repost. Black and White works well here. Good landing pose. I like the trees; for me they add an interesting element. The detail and handling of the whites is excellent.

@Diane_Miller and @Allen_Brooks thank you for the find comments and suggestions.

Beautiful Image !!! Black and White really shines in the image. I love the Tone !!!

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David: this is a beautiful image which captures the delicacy of the bird as it lands. The BW treatment is great and either variation works for me.

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