Portrait of a Columbine

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

Yellow Mountain Columbine Aquilegia flavescens

These flowers are to me, the pinnacle of floral art. You have probably noticed that I love wildflowers, but Columbine have always been a favorite. It could be because “aquilegia” means Eagle in Latin, or it could be because of where they grow. I first met Blue Columbine while exploring the backcountry of Rocky Mountain National Park. I loved seeing them blooming among the rocks at tree line. My favorite place to see them was at the outlet of Sky Pond at just shy of 11,000ft of elevation. They are much harder to find here in Montana, but I have seen a few. Red Columbine are stunning as well, with their slightly smaller flowers and forest setting. The Yellow Columbine is no slouch when it comes to beauty. They love cool moist settings along the forest floor. Their flowers grow on long, slender stems making them nod in the slightest breeze. I found this one in a spot I visit frequently. It is situated between a roaring creek and a steep talus slope where Pika’s thrive. There are towering Douglas Fir trees with a few Lodgepole Pine trees sprinkled in. It’s in a steep walled canyon that makes the sun rise later and set earlier, making for a perfect place for these beauties to thrive. It makes me thrive too.

I shot this on my way to work in Big Sky, Montana this morning. I had a few minutes to spare before an 8am meeting, so I drove a few miles up a forest service road on my 1hr commute. I set my alarm for 30 minutes when I left the main highway, knowing this was how much time I had to be back to the highway. I was able to find this flower, shoot 540 images for 4 different compositions AND be back to the highway before my 30 minutes was even up! Such a great start to the morning!

Feedback Requested

This was photographed before the sun had cleared a ridge to the northeast. It was a brisk 35º! There are a lot of bushes and trees over this area too, so it was pretty dark. I wanted to convey the cool, dark morning, but maintain the bright cheery nature of these flowers. The background is the result of the stack and not artificially created. Does the flower look too bright for the background? I played around with it some and ended up preferring it this way. There was another flower bud just below this one, but it seemed distracting, so I removed it with Lightroom.

Technical Details

Camera: NIKON Z 8
Lens:Sigma VR 105mm f/2.8G
Focal length: 105mm
Shutter speed: 1/125s
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO: 640
104 images stacked in Helicon Focus Method=C (S=10)

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Paul, I’m also a big fan of columbines. This one is beautiful and your focus stack seems to have worked well. I don’t think the flower is too bright for the background. Your brightest tone stops well short of white, though, and in this case I think bringing the white point closer to white would be a plus.

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Gorgeous portrait!! And a beautiful stack! The BG is lovely, with just enough tonal detail, and the simple color palette is just right for a quiet setting in the woods. I love the detail in the stamen, with the anthers so nicely visible. I could also wonder about just a bit more brightness, maybe just stretching the white end, but it may take away some of the mood.

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Paul, this is a beautiful portrait. I hope you have some wall space for this one! Excellent. I can’t think of anything that would improve this.

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Paul: I envy you the discovery in the wild. I’ve only seen the blue ones in RMNP. We’ve grown some in our garden but they don’t thrive in the Texas heat so it’s been awhile since I’ve had the opportunity. Superb portrait and effort well spent both in the capture and the processing. Most excellent. >=))>

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Well done, Paul. The stacking brings out excellent detail. The flower does not appear too bright for the background. Frame and hang.

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I agree with your comments.

This is a striking photo, well composed and technically perfect. I like the “calm” mood. As others have mentioned, you could bring out the whites, but that would depend on the feeling you want from the photo.

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