Critique Style Requested: In-depth
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Self Critique
The form of the vegetation mimics that of Tillotson Peak, in the background.
It would have been better if I were there when the various cacti, trees and other brush were in bloom.
Creative direction
To highlight the environment required for the success of Organ Pipe Cactus, only found in the Sonoran Desert of Arizona and Mexico.
Specific Feedback
Any attraction to city-dwellers? Is the story clear? Would you want to walk in this garden?
Technical Details
Canon EOS 5D II; Canon EF 28-70mm @ 70mm; f/16 @ 1/30 sec, ISO 100; Gitzo tripod, RRS BH 55; Canon RS-80N3 remote switch
Description
The namesake cactus for the Organ Pipe Cactus NM, with Tillotson Peak in the background, shares its habitat with ocotillo, brittlebush, prickly pear, Teddybear cholla, creosote bush, palo verde, saltbush, mesquite and chainfruit cholla.