Quality Time

Image Critiques Everything Else Critiques
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This is a slightly reworked image from 2017. Although a nice beach and landscape, the image is really about the dog and its person enjoying quality time together. Thanks for your comments on what the image needs.

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What artistic feedback would you like if any?

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Panasonic Lumix DMC_LX100

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2

Here’s another take on the image that is darker.

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Hi Larry. A very cool scene. I like the composition with the nice leading lines. For my taste, the second version works a bit better, but I think you might try dehazing the mountains a little bit to give them more presence. I do wish the land/sea interface didn’t behead the man.

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Thanks, Dennis. I didn’t realize the man was beheaded. Perhaps it looks this way because of the beach and water coming together by his head. He’s pretty tiny in the image - maybe no one would be looking. You have a good eye. I will try the dehazing to see how it affects the image. I wanted to keep that haze/fog in the background. I appreciate your visit and comments.