Critique Style Requested: Standard
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Description
this is a razorbill in Iceland
these guys are pretty cool looking.
There was a recent image of several in-flight by one of our colleagues, Ryan H
I would suggest that you have a look at that. He is from Britain but I don’t know where the image was taken. My guess is there are probably several small islands or cliff areas in Britain where this could be taken. Or it could be Iceland.
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anything of help to me as a photographer that improves my skills
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iso 1250, f5.6, 2000th, Sony A1, 400mm
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Hi David
Two gold stars, this is the best photograph of a Razorbill I have ever seen. The marking, color detail, and control of the blacks and whites are great. Nice work.
Peter
This is a gorgeous portrait, David. the lighting is excellent and that open bill really makes this special. I’m glad you found this in your files.
@Dennis_Plank @Peter_Morrissey
Thanks for your support this year. I really appreciate your insights into my work..
Peter knows well how difficult it can be.
For the last three weeks, I’ve been really dizzy and
Lightheaded. I don’t know something that’s going to last a long time, weather it will go away tomorrow. I’m in the process of getting an evaluation at a place where they specialize in dizziness related issues. In Lacey. I’ll keep you posted.
David
David, what a beautiful portrait! Really nice. A perfect focus on the head and bill, the painting-like colors in the LRC… Splendid!
David, love the expression you captured here. Great with the open beak, fine sharpness on the head, and nice exposure. Well done.
Spectacular!! Wonderful crop, perfect colors and gorgeous detail!! Congratulations on the EP – very well-deserved! And fervent hopes for your health! It is so nice to be seeing your images again!
This is a beautiful portrait and certainly deserves an EP. Congrats! DOF is fine and the soft BG separates the subject from the rest of the scene. Awesome!..Jim
