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Description

More fun with Razorbills.
Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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Any

Technical Details

Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm, f8, 500mm, 1/2500, ISO 400, cropped around 10% and I used two control points to work on the blacks. in DXO PhotoLab 7.

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Nice images again, Peter. The first two really start to show the take-off. I kind of wish you had the first sweep of the wings after take-off, but it often doesn’t work (mine are usually cut off somewhere!). The standing Auk is excellent though it doesn’t seem to flow from the other two images.

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Hi Dennis
The Razorbill is getting set for the portrait. Thank for your comment.
Peter

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All nice looks at the Razorbills with good handling of whites and blacks.

5

Hi Allen
Thank you the your comment.
Peter