Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Trinity Center, Northern California
“Softly, I will leave you softly
For my heart would break if you should wake and see me go
So I leave you softly long before you miss me”
Just listening to some oldies today:
"Softly, as I leave you " By Matt Munro, 1965
Beastly hot from 10-4, but lots going on this time of year.
Lots of dry dandelions, one of my favorite subjects, along with a stiff but intermittent wind blowing the.
Lawn chair with umbrella, sunscreen, careful attention to the BG, remote, ice water and patience.
I RARELY have the patience to set all this up, but I’m glad I did this time
I dug through probably 3500 + images to find this one.
Specific Feedback
all comments, nits, and suggestions very welcome
Technical Details
SONY A1 II
FE 90mm F2.8 Macro G OSS
Date Taken: 2025-08-1512:32:24
Exposure Time: 1/2000 sec
F Number: f/8
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 10000
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Software: Adobe Photoshop 26.8 + DxO Pure Raw 5
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