Tempi the Tarantula (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 1 (latest)

What changed: Thanks Guys - bright areas burnt/removed Thanks for your kind comments too Yes shot through glass lol

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

There I was, in my Indiana Jones gear, on my stomach crawling though the deepest jungle when suddenly I came face to face with…

(Visited my daughter and her partner has this pet. I don’t normally take pet pics - but shame not to get a portrait!)

Feedback Requested

Obviously Tempi was too mobile to stack. Hope the focus and composition works? …and the pic has some impact. I ws surprised how tiny the 8 eyes were.

Was after a slightly scary feel

Technical Details

Camera: SONY ILCE-7M4
Lens: FE 90mm F2.8 Macro G OSS
Focal length: 90mm
Shutter speed: 1/60s
Aperture: f/9
ISO: 6400
Flash: Fired

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Without the headline, I’m not sure I would have been able to guess what this was. Now that I’ve opened this up, I find it an exceptional intimate image. I love the crosseyed eyes with the little sprig of hair delineating them. I’g glad you didn’t try and do a focus stack. This image is about the face and if focus stacked this would be a very busy and complicated image. He almost has the look of a coconut with eyes. OK, I’m admittedly grasping here or my mind is wandering but I do see it. :)). Funny read up too. I love it and I think you got the slightly scary feel you were looking for. Thanks for posting this and thanks for being such a giving contributor. You’ve certainly jumped right in here at NPN.

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Your daughter has a very interesting pet. The comp is fine and you would not know this is a pet with the close-up comp. The bright diagonal above the spider’s head distracts my eyes a bit and you could burn or edit it out to make it less obvious. Otherwise, I think that you got the focus where it needs to be and its a wonderfully scary comp for sure…Jim

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Huw: Now that’s a face only a mother could love and everyone else would fear. I’ll be lazy and just ditto @Jim_Zablotny. Really good job on the comp and capture. Was there glass between you and Tempi? Inquiring minds want to know. >=))>

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Great photo! I love the composition, color and framing. The mode for me is great, very menacing in a sci-fi kind of way!

Thanks @timothy3