Critique Style Requested: In-depth
The photographer has shared comprehensive information about their intent and creative vision for this image. Please examine the details and offer feedback on how they can most effectively realize their vision.
Self Critique
I like the colors in front and in the background, the compo is OK, I think, but is this fascinating enough?
Creative direction
I am aiming for an artistic approach in my work, but I feel often I miss a bit of creative talent. For in my eyes there is always a lack of daring. I hope you understand what I try to explain.
Specific Feedback
Creative and aesthetic feedback, please!
Technical Details
Canon 100-400mm, f11, 1/125sec, tripod. Two shots in the camera, the second one has shifted a little bit to the right.
Description
I try to make paintings with my camera, now with two pics, sometimes with more.