Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Since Kris posted a day lily I decided to look at some of the many images I have from this season and thought I would share these two depictions. We all have different ways of rating captures. I use the star method and generally don’t give consideration to anything less than 3 stars. Both of these rated 3+. Both are three shot stacks with the anthers isolated.>=))>
Specific Feedback
Does the tight version appeal to you? BG still too busy despite the relatively shallow DOF?
Technical Details
#1 Sony A7rIII
Sony FE 70-200 f2.8 GM-II @ 93mm
ISO 400, 1/320 @ f5.6
#2 Sony FE 70-200 f2.8 GM-II @ 162 mm
ISO 400, 1/400 @ f5.6
Critique Template
Use of the template is optional, but it can help spark ideas.
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