Walking on Water

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This was kind of fun to photograph! The geese were, indeed, walking on water! But frozen water.

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Any and all comments are welcome!

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Interesting…There’s enough softness in the ice to let it look like water, which is good for a double take. I’d be tempted to process for a bit more contrast in the ice of the bottom 1/3, but recognize that the dark to light transition from the top to the bottom is also important.

Thanks, @Mark_Seaver. It was really just a fun image for me! I see your point about the contrast. I can probably integrate that into the image with masking to minimize it toward the top.