Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
I was taking photos at a favorite creek. I spent some time looking for small parts of the scene that might be interesting. When I framed this shot, I thought it was odd, which was reason enough to take the shot.
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ISO 100, 400mm, f/16, 3.2 sec.
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I see what you mean about it being a bit odd, but I like the flow of the water through this image. I’m not too sure about the bright white spot on the “island”. I’d be tempted to remove it to se if I prefer that version as it seems to put a dead stop in the flow.
Did you mean to put this in “Everything Else”?
Yes. I don’t know where else it would go.
You’re absolutely right about the white spot. I never noticed it. Thanks, and consider it zapped. 
I guess it’s as good a place as any.
Very Cool Image. I can see and feel the energy. I see this in an abstract vibe and I think it may also work in B&W… Clone out the white spots as you probably already have. Really Good Don.
Thanks, Gill. There’s not much color in it and it does work well in B&W.
