Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Adult male; Audubon variety
Any thoughts appreciated.
Canon R5; 100-500 with 1.4 TC at 700 mm; 1/3200 at f10; ISO 4000
Ah butter butts. They should be back in about a month or so and I hope I can get this close! Looks like he has his courting duds on. Great bright yellow. The branches behind the tail are a little weird, but what can you do? Nice job.
Allen you’ve been posting some really nice shots of our local birds for us. This is another one. Beautiful, bright colors here with a really nice look. Branches already noted by Kris.
Thanks @Kris_Smith and @Ed_Williams for your kinds words. Here’s a version with the one branch removed, which I think helps. When I removed the other branch, I didn’t like the result as well, as I felt it connected the tree to the bird and the tree seemed too isolated otherwise-just my take; personal preference. Thanks again.
Nice job on this one, Allen. Focus exposure, and eye contact are all excellent and as @Kris_Smith noted, this guy is in prime breeding plumage. The tree in the background doesn’t bother me much. It would probably make a difference in a photo contest, but not anywhere else.
I never get to see these guys in breeding plumage down here so this is a treat. Well taken and I like the pose. Good head turn.
