Yellow-rumped Warbler

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

I liked the warmth of the image and the clean, complementary background.

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Any thoughts appreciated.

Technical Details

Canon R5; 100-500 with 1.4 TC at 700 mm; 1/640 at f10, +1 EV; ISO 8000


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Normally, the out of focus foreground elements would turn me off a bit, Allen, but I think they work very well with this image. My eye tends to go past them and concentrate on the bird and when I let my attention step back the add a rather pleasing element to the composition. I would look at bringing down the highlights on the breast and throat a bit.

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Hi Allen, nice warm color palette as you state, I also think the composition works with the foreground sticks adding a point of interest. Pleasing BG and a nice pose.

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A really nice image! I like all the branches framing the bird- something other than a completely-clean view. Nice pose and wonderful colours, and that smooth BG is excellent.

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This made me smile. :slight_smile:

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Very cute. The branches bring some excitement to the photo, as if he’s sitting behind a screen. Remove these branches and you’re left with a rather boring photo of an - albeit beautiful - bird. So: great setting, very nice composition and photo!
Grt, Ingrid.

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I too like the soft colors in the image, Allen.The branches also aid in the overall color scheme. The lights and elements make this a pleasing image.