You said I could have a turn.

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Photographed at the entrance to Everglades National Park, on Oct 24, 2024 at 1:15 PM. This minor misunderstanding last for another 6 frames. I will post the nest 4 tomorrow.
Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm, f7.1, 500mm, 1/1600, +2EV, ISO 2000. a 10% crop and the use of 3 control point to tone down the orange on the cable and buoy.

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Peter, these are excellent! All have fine detail, colours, and action. I think #2 is the best because of the best look at the turquoise eyes and mouths. The rusted whatever-it-is (buoy?) adds a lot of interest.These guys seem to squabble a lot…makes for great shots if you can get them.
Really fine catch!

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Great interaction series, Peter. The detail is excellent.

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Nice series Peter - great interaction. Very nice to get both birds sharp with fine exposure. Love seeing the blue of the mouths.

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Hi Sandy Thank you for the comment and the spell check.
Peter

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Excellent interaction images, Peter. I’m looking forward to the denouement.

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Love the action shots, especially the order in which they are presented. The last one looks like they are ready to do battle. Waiting to see the “denouement”, too.