An Intimate Moment

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Nursing Fur Seal pup,
Kaikoura, New Zealand South Island

These are the only seals with little ear flaps
I liked the little strand of seaweed hanging on the pup’s back flipper

Specific Feedback

comments and suggestions welcome

The fur of these seals is quite thick and shaggy, and may appear over-sharpened when wet.

Technical Details

Sony A1 II
200-600 @ 254
Software: Adobe Photoshop 26.2 + DxO Pure Raw 5
Date Taken: 2025-03-28 22:23:44
Exposure Time: 1/2500 sec
F Number: f/13
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 2500
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0 EV


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Cool behaviour shot nicely taken, although I wish for a lower POV.
Interestinly the color pallette of Seal and the BG is same but there is good amount of seperation.
May work well as B&W.

Unfortunately, the rocks with the seals are considerably below the only viewing area, and it’s impossible to get closer or lower. I wish!