At the park

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Just standing, leaning over a bit. All peaceful .

Specific Feedback

All feedback is welcome

Technical Details

F11, 1/6, handheld. iso 2000, 24-120 at 59mm

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Well done, Ben. I can’t think of any suggestions to make.

I prefer more variation in the greens. It is difficult to do this and still keep the fog in the background but here is an attempt to show you what I mean. I also wanted the leaves to have luminosity variation.

Lovely as is, Ben. It’s a nice composition, with the denser vegetation at top and bottom framing the lighter trunk. Wonderful light.

Ben,
I love the green tones and the light BG fog sets the mood for this peaceful looking scene. Another wonderful haiku BTW. Beautifully done; no suggestions from me.

@Bonnie_Lampley , @Ed_Lowe , @Don_Peters , Thank you all again for your appreciation of my work. @bill_theis Bill, Sorry , but I find that you took the life out of this image. Still thanks for the effort .