I prefer more variation in the greens. It is difficult to do this and still keep the fog in the background but here is an attempt to show you what I mean. I also wanted the leaves to have luminosity variation.
Ben,
I love the green tones and the light BG fog sets the mood for this peaceful looking scene. Another wonderful haiku BTW. Beautifully done; no suggestions from me.
@Bonnie_Lampley , @Ed_Lowe , @Don_Peters , Thank you all again for your appreciation of my work. @bill_theis Bill, Sorry , but I find that you took the life out of this image. Still thanks for the effort .