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This was my 3rd time exploring the slot canyons of Zion and everything looked too familiar. I just wasn’t getting inspired to shoot at anything. So I started to look very closely. The rushing water had deposited it’s silt on the canyon walls which had dried and left patterns. I chose this pattern.
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GFX50R, 45-100mm, f/11, focus stacked, long exposure.
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Is this image engaging enough?
These colors are pretty natural. Should they be boosted?
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All kidding aside (and apologies for my warped sense of humor), it appears to be biological growth or a deposit on a wood surface - perhaps a wall, floor or even a boat hull. The wood itself has plenty of character (and is certainly photogenic) but I’m not sure what the growth/deposit adds to that.
I’m looking forward to learning what this is.
Edit - I read the image description and now it makes sense. The color really makes it look like wood IMO. Maybe a B&W conversion is worth a look?
I tried that and it didn’t seem to make it better. If I add a lot of contrast to the b&w it does change it but doesn’t speak to me neither. Thanks for the feedback though.
Hi Igor,
My first impression was some kind of growth starting on dried out wood; then I read your description and it makes sense as to what it is. The diagonal striations in the rock work very nicely in this scene. I think we all hit the wall at some point or another in our photography and we have to step back and proceed in another direction. I certainly know I have.
If I’m being honest the very first thing I see is a pile of sand on wood plank flooring.
But after careful examination this looks like the growths that you get in Zion and Bryce on the rocks there. I have no idea what they are but that’s what I see.
Just saw what this actually is and it’s petty much as I suspected. I did not know it was silt. I always thought it was some sort of bacteria growth. Good to know. I think it’s engaging in a way where the viewer really doesn’t know what it is and because of that, it makes the viewer think. I’m not sure it’s engaging beyond the fact that it’s a little mysterious and abstract. That might very well be enough though.
The 13-year old in me thought “Hey, Pterodactylus poo.”
This does have a three-dimensional quality that is intriguing, and I’m enamored of the subtle lines and textures of the background. I do prefer it with a little less saturation in the dark reds.
It looks like mud splattered on a wooden surface, or a fallen fragment of a bird/insect nest. I see splatters like this regularly where there’s lots of insect activity around old buildings. I wouldn’t have guessed stone.
