What technical feedback would you like if any?
What artistic feedback would you like if any?
Any pertinent technical details:
Not sure about the composition.
Taken at Longwood’s display garden. Used Canon SX60, F5, 1/60 sec., ISO 400.
Very cool, Patricia. The feeling of depth is very impressive. The leaf in the lower left seems to pull the balance that way a bit. I might be tempted to clone over it with some of the darker area and the indistinct fern patterns.
I agree partly with Dennis, but I believe you could achieve a better balance by cropping the left side about an inch and adding a content aware inch on the right in the crop. This would give a stronger diagonal with the remains of the lower left leaf and two leading lines in the leaf veins to support the diagonal.
I like it as is… Your processing is always sort of intriguing, a great look to it…
I like as is, I might just darken the leaves, although they don’t really distract me from the center and the all the lovely colors between.
I like the repost as is, Patricia. The image is pushing up and right and you left the room there. I could see Phil’s suggestion to include part of that lower left leaf as a leading line, but the bloom itself pulls one into the image nicely.
Patricia: I like the repost but on the whole I think I like the original better. All I would do on the original is make the leaf tip on the right of the flower go away. I’m OK with the LLC. Beautiful color palette. >=))>