Dream Flower

Image Critiques Macro/Close-up Critiques
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What technical feedback would you like if any?

What artistic feedback would you like if any?

This is an indoor set up with 100mm macro lens. I like to get up close with inner workings of flowers. trying to create a dream like atmosphere . tripod mount,Pentax k30,100mm macro,iso 100,1/5 sec,f4.0

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Mike, I am enjoying this image. The colors, the selective focus, all works well for me. If I were to make any changes, it might be to see if the darker area in the bottom right side could be lightened a bit and see if that improves the image. Also, there is a bright spot in the upper right. I just love the color, one of my favorites.

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Mike, this is definitely dreamy. The tight look at the petal’s edge surrounded by the similar color works very well.

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Mark and Shirley ,thank you for your kind comments. I think your suggestions are solid and appreciated. Thank you :grinning:

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Hi Mike, definitely a dreamy look with pleasant colors. I’m enjoying the composition with the petals in the right foreground and blurred color elsewhere. I agree with Shirley’s suggestions. Nice image.

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Thank you Allen for taking the time to comment. Happy you enjoyed the image.

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Mike: I like the idea and the color especially. I cropped this a little tighter and did some more sharpening. Also, please resize your images to about 1500 pixels on the longest side before posting. Posting full resolution images taxes the server and makes them more inviting targets for image thieves. I just noticed the same issue with your iris image. Here are the sizing recommendations excerpted from the site posting guidelines. Keep the shots coming. >=))>

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Thank you for your comments, your version does look cleaned up. Sorry about the file size I thought I had that set. I will catch on :))